Interesting! I liked this line best: "His speech, his lack of tact, his hair"--hahaha, we will never get over making fun of the hair in Hikago.
It's cool seeing other people's WIPs! I'm glad you posted that first part with a sentence/scene that doesn't finish--glad I'm not the only one who does that!
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Date: 2019-05-05 06:50 pm (UTC)It's cool seeing other people's WIPs! I'm glad you posted that first part with a sentence/scene that doesn't finish--glad I'm not the only one who does that!