help please?

[pandoraculpa]

Hello! I was wondering if any of you lovely people would be interested in doing some beta reading for a weird Hikago fic I'm trying to iron out. Spelling and grammar are fine, characterization is fine; it's more some structural issues that I'm having trouble ironing out. So my only request would be that whoever offers understands that the kind of advice I need will be things like spotting out extraneous scenes and/or scene elements, and identifying thematic elements that need expansion.

So, if anyone feels up to tackling this, you will have my undying gratitude and adoration. And if you have any questions, by all means let me know and I'll elaborate. Mods, if this request is out of line for this community, please feel free to delete it.

Thanks!